5B attempt in writing
Friday, July 01, 2011Last week, I taught year 5B on how to make a mind map. The mind map is to assist them in understanding the components of a sentence. Mainly consisting of nouns and verbs. Based on the mind map, I assigned them homework on sentence construction using the items on the mind map. Today, they will showcase their ability in writing.
Get ready guys!
41 comments
posting problem! sigh....
ReplyDelete1.the man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2.the man is milking a cow.
3.the man is carrying a milk container.
4.some turkeys and ducks are eating a grains.
5.the goats and sheep are grazing in a field.
name:Alif Aiman bin Kamarudin.
1.One man is feeding the fish at a fish pond.
ReplyDelete2.Many goats are grazing in the field.
3.One man is milking a cow at cowshed.
4.Two man are feeding the chickens at the chicken coop.
5.One man and one woman are carrying the milk containers to a cowshed.
1.A man is feeding the chicks.
ReplyDelete2.A women is carring the milk containers.
3.The goats are grazing in the field.
4.A man is feeding the fish.
5.A man is milking a cow.
Nurul Syaza
1 The man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2 Some turkeys and ducks are eating a grains.
3 The man is milking a cow.
4 The man is carrying a milk container.
5 The goats and sheep are grazing in a field.
` muhd azhar 5b
1. the man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2. the man is milking a cow.
3. the women is crrying the milk containers.
4. the goat and sheep are grazing in the field.
5. some turkeys and duck are eating grains.
name :haikal iskandar bin raadzi
1.The man is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2.The woman is carring the milk containers.
3.The man is milking a cow.
4.The man is taking out sock of animals feed from the store.
5.The man is transporting sock of animals feed in a wheel borrow.
Nur Syafinas Bt Mohd Fisuol.
1.The man is milking the cow.
ReplyDelete2.The man is carrying the milk containers.
3.The man are feeding the chickens.
4.Some turkeys and ducks are eating grains.
5.The goats and sheep are grazing in the field.
Muhd.Afiq Fahmi b.Muhd Nasir
1.The cow lives of the cowshed.
ReplyDelete2.The goat lives of the goat shed.
3.The man is carrying the milk containers.
4.The man is feeding the fish.
5.The man is milking a cow.
SITI NUR ZULAIKHA BINTI ZAIDI (5 BERJAYA).
1.A man is transporting sacks of animal food.
ReplyDelete2.A man is feeding the fish.
3.Some turkeys and ducks are eating grains.
4.A man is carrying the milk containers.
5.A man is taking a sack of animal food.
Muhd Amirredza B. Rosley
1.The sheep are grazing in the field.
ReplyDelete2.The man is milking a cow.
3.The woman is carrying the milk containers.
4.The man is feeding the fish.
5.The man is transporting sacks of animal feed.
Name:Nur Ain Dayana Bt Ruslan.
ALIF AIMAN: first letter capital letter.
ReplyDeleteNURIN: check no 3
1.The man is milking a cow.
ReplyDelete2.The man is carrying the milk containers.
3.The turkeys and ducks are eating the grains.
4.The man is transporting sacks of an animals feel in a wheelbarrow.
5.The man are feeding the chickens.
Muhammad Iqbal Shauqie B.Zainal Abidin
1.In chicken coop has a chicken.
ReplyDelete2.The man is milking a cow.
3.The man is feeding a chicken.
4.The man and woman are carrying a milk container.
5.the goats and sheep are grazing in the field.
NAME:MUHD ADIIB BIN MOHD RAZAK
1. A manis feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2. A woman is carrying the milk containers.
3. A man is transporting sack of animal feed in a wheelbarrow.
4. The goat and sheep are grazing in the field.
5. A man is milking a cow
Muhammad Alif Ismail 5 Berjaya
1.The man is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2.The man is milking a cow.
3.The woman is carrying the milk containers.
4.The man is transporting sock of animals feed
in a wheel borrow.
5.The man is taking out a sack of animals feed
from the store.
Aishah binti abd mutalib 5b
1.The men is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2.The men is milking a cow.
3.The men and woman are feeding the chickens.
4.The men is carrying the milk contantainers.
5.The men is transporting sacks of animal feed in a wheelbarrow.
name :shahrul amri bin dahlan.
1.The man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2.The man is taking out a sack of animal feed from the store.
3.The woman is milking a cow.
4.The woman is carring the milk containers.
5.The man is transporting sock of animals feed in a wheel borrow.
Name:Nurul Syarafina Bt Rozwan
1 The man give are feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2 The man and the women are carrying the milk containers.
3 One man is milking at the cow.
4 The goats and sheep are grazing in the field.
5 The man is taking out a sock.
SYAZA: ok!
ReplyDeleteAZHAR: check no. 2
HAIKAL: first letter capital letter!
SYAFINAZ: check no. 2, 3 and 5 spelling error.
AMIR: OK!
AFIQ: ok!
ZULAIKHA: check no. 1 and 2
1.The man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2.The man is milking a cow.
3.The man is carrying a milk container.
4.Some turkeys and ducks are eating a grains.
5.The goats and sheep are grazing in a field.
1.A man is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2.A man carrying the milk containers.
3.A man are feeding the chickens.
4.A man is milking a cow.
5.A man is taking out a sack of animal feed.
Muhd Faisal Ikmal Bin Rosmi
1.There are many duck in the chicken coop.
ReplyDelete2.A man is transporting feed in the wheelbarrow.
3.There are many duck at the fish pond.
4.The goot are in the goot shed.
5.The turkey are eating the grain.
Nurul yasmin
1.The man is feeding a fish.
ReplyDelete2.The man is milking a cow.
3.The man is carrying a milk container.
4.Some turkeys and ducks are eating a grains.
5.The goats and sheep are grazing in a field.
Alif aiman bin kamarudin 5b
1. The man is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2. The man is milking a cow.
3. The woman is carrying the milk containers.
4. The man is tranporting sack of animals feed in a wheel borrow.
5.The man is taking out a sack of animals feed from the store.
syaidatul atihrah
1.The goats and sheep are grazing in the field.
ReplyDelete2.The man is feeding the fish.
3.In the chicken coop has a chickens.
4.The man is feeding the chickens.
5.The man is milking a cow.
name :alif zuhairi bin ahmad zaki.
AMIRREDZA, IQBAL and NUR AIN: OK!
ReplyDeleteADIBB: check no. 1, 4 and 5
ALIFF: check no. 1 and 5
AISHAH and SHAHRUL: check no. 4 spelling error
SYARAFINA: check no. 5 spelling error
NURIN and ZAKI: please remember to write your name.
ZAKI: check no. 1 and 5
1.The turkeys and ducks are eating grains.
ReplyDelete2.The fish lives of the fish pond.
3.The man is transpoting sacks of animal feed in a wheelbarrow.
4.The women is carrying milk containers.
5.The man is feeding the chickens.
NUR INSYIERAH BT MAN (5BERJAYA).
1.Man is feeding fish the fish pond.
ReplyDelete2.Women is milking cow the cow shed.
3.Man is grazing goat the goat shed.
4.Man is feeding chicken and hen the chicken coop.
5.Man is transporting sacks of animal feed in a wheelbarrow.
name:nurhaziyaniyasmin
1.A farmer is feeding the animals in his farm.
ReplyDelete2.The man is taking a sack of grain to feed the turkeys.
3.A man is transporting sacks of animal feed by using a wheelbarrow.
4.A man is milking a cow to gets some milk to drink.
5.Some goat and sheep are grazing the grass in the field.
Nurul Nabila Nadia 5B
FAISAL: OK!
ReplyDeleteYASMIN: check no. 1,3,4 and 5
ALIF AIMAN: check no. 4
SYAIDATUL : OK!
ALIF ZUHAIRI: check no. 3
1.The man is feeding the chicken.
ReplyDelete2.The man is feeding the fishes.
3.The cows are eating.
4.The man is milking the cow.
5.Have one chicken is siting on the chicken coop.
Nur Alia bt Jemle
1.They are many farmer are working in the farm.
ReplyDelete2.A cow are in the cowshed.
3.The man and the woman are carrying the milk containers to their friend.
4.The man who is wearing a hat is feeding a fish at the fish pond.
5.The man is transporting sack of animal feed in a wheelbarrow.
Name:Nur Syahirah Bt Rosol (5B)(^_^).
INSYIERAH and NABILA NADIA: OK!
ReplyDeleteHAZIYANI: remember to write A man, A woman. check no. 1 and 3
ALIA: check no. 5
ReplyDeleteSYAHIRAH: check no. 1 and 2
1.The turkeys are eating grains.
ReplyDelete2.The man is carrying the milk containers.
3.The goats are grazing in the field.
4.The man is milking a cow.
5.The goats are under the shed.
HALIMATUN SAADIAH
HALIMATUN: OK!
ReplyDelete1.A man is feeding the fish.
ReplyDelete2.A women is feeding the goats are under the shed.
3.A man is milking a cow.
4.The turkey and ducks are eating grains.
5.A man is feeding the chickens.
name:nurizzatiadlina.
1.The woman who is carrying the milk container.
ReplyDelete2.The man is transporting sack of animals feed in a wheelbarrow.
3.The man is taking out a sack of animals feed from the store.
4.The woman is feeding the fish.
5.The men is milking a cow.
NOOR ALIA SHAMIRA
1.A man is milking the cow.
ReplyDelete2.A man is carrying the milk containers.
3.Some turkeys and ducks are eating the grain.
4.A man is feeding the fish.
5.The goats and sheep are grazing in the field.
Muhd.Amier Ilham
Teacher Asniem is reading my comment!
ReplyDelete